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Dream Goddess-Yume · Trimis: 29/08/2006 19:24 Titlul subiectului: Poetry Land

sper sa nu se soopere nimeni k am facut topicul asta :whistle:

... aici, membrii isi vor posta poeziile , va rog sa fie creatii proprii nu poezii adunate de pe stiu eu unde ... incep eu: (va rog sa va spuneti parerea)

Cry of unacomplished love

Swimming in the ocean of tears
Covered with blood
Full of despair … still hoping
I will find you waiting
For me to come again
But looking for you
Seeking trough the night
I see that you’re not there
And I realized that love
Is nothing else than a breeze
Coming and going back
Exactly as it came
And seeking again and again
For exactly the same thing
And loosing each time…
And all is useless
Cause all I’ve ever had
It’s gone with the breeze
Isn’t it true?
Love is just a game
Ones win, others loose …

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I am tired of all this pain...
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My Will-Dream · Trimis: 29/08/2006 21:23 Titlul subiectului:

pot sa zic ca e magnifica ! am ramas fara cuvinte ! ai talent si la povesti si la poezii !!!!!!!!!!
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I step trought the dark to the paradise sadness , with blind eyes a look for the answers
you take my little heaven and destroy my delicate heart , the tears who flow into the raven … transfome into an ocean .
I wont to be your protector angel , to fall to the sky on the earth , in front of your eyes , knock knock to your door ....
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sora_fan_anime · Trimis: 30/08/2006 10:08 Titlul subiectului:

ana_kurama are dreptate ... doamne ce talent ai ... numi gasesc cuvintele pt aceasta poezie ... ai un talent deosebit .
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My life is beautiful and you can't distroy it , 'cause my love is strong and you don't know what is the love . you can't feel . that makes you diferent and could inside .

Dream Goddess-Yume · Trimis: 30/08/2006 13:50 Titlul subiectului:

ma bucur atat de moolt k va place ceea ce scriu ... asta ma incurajeaza enorm .. mai pun una, nu asa de reusita, da` ata ete ... astept critici si aprecieri:

Without smile

I no longer can smile
I am cought in my tears,
Everything is so pale,
I can barely be happy again.
Life is not what it seems,
Is the wind and the air,
It`s everywhere,but it comes
And goes all over again.
All I wish is the love
That I never felt before,
All I wish is to see
A smile on your face brought by me.
Just to be your guardian angel,
The one that will make you feel safe,
So please let em be your everything,
And I`ll make you my everything
So there will never be a day
When we won`t have nothing,
Cause I am yours
And you are mine.
We will never loose
All that we have.

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nu e cine stie ce, sfarsitul e km brusc, si e un pic km confuza, da` yo risc si`o pun ... :-)

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I am tired of all this pain...
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rose_of_darkness · Trimis: 03/09/2006 04:34 Titlul subiectului:

CRITICI ??? Doamne fereshte ... dar sunt superber(tzi'am mai zis asta de 2 ori ;-)

) ... sa mai pui !
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Kaleidostarfan · silent fairy Data inscrierii: 21/Iul/2006 Mesaje: 133

Dream goddess sant superbe poeziile....ca dovada ca nu a avut nimeni curajul sa puna alta poezie. Punetzi si voi .... chiar daca nu sant la fel de bune ca ale lui Dream Goddess. Eu asa fac :-P

Am mai pus poezia asta pe loveanime (deocamdata e singura din repertoriul meu.....e prima mea poezie....dar nu e deosebit de reusita, de fapt nu imi place deloc , parca nu suna bine. O sa mai incerc pana iese bine)

La capatul curcubeului

Lacrimi cadeau ca roua diminetii;
Sufletul meu era pustiu ;
Un gol imens ce lua sensul vietzii
Si un strigat tarziu.

Inima mea vibreaza si tresare,
O stea se-aprinde, alta moare.
Soapte , iubire, un vis feeric;
Lumina ai adus in intuneric.

Farmec, magie si candoare,
O ploaie de raze si culoare
Visez ca te-ntalnesc,
Nu vreau sa ma trezesc.

Ai disparut! E prea tarziu...
Acum sufletul meu e din nou pustiu.
Oriunde ai fi o sa te gasesc!
Nimic nu e-nzadar pentru ca te iubesc!

Dream Goddess-Yume · Trimis: 12/09/2006 12:14 Titlul subiectului:

ba e foarte frumoasa, superba kiar ... imi place moolt mai ales a 2a si a 3a strofa .... imi place moolt la a 2a strofa ---> O stea se-aprinde, alta moare. ... e superba, dar versul asta imi vibreaza ink in minte, e sooper, esti talentata kaleisodtarfan, foarte talentata :-)

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My Will-Dream · Trimis: 12/09/2006 12:38 Titlul subiectului:

da shi mie mi se pare superba poezia ... si versurile sunt magnifice !!!!!!!!!!!! mai pune .daca mai scrii !
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I step trought the dark to the paradise sadness , with blind eyes a look for the answers
you take my little heaven and destroy my delicate heart , the tears who flow into the raven … transfome into an ocean .
I wont to be your protector angel , to fall to the sky on the earth , in front of your eyes , knock knock to your door ....
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Dream Goddess-Yume · Trimis: 14/09/2006 11:22 Titlul subiectului:

sa mai risc? mai pun una ... :-D

Balada tristetii

Ma scald in lacrimi argintii
Si ma las victima durerii,
Astept cu patima sfarsitul
Si fac pace cu destinul.

Dar resemnarea nu-i o cale
Eu voi lupta in continuare.
Chiar daca toate-s efemere
Nu-nseamna ca moartea-i o placere.

Alerg pe plaiurile raiului durerii
Si inot in marea neplacerii
Si visele mi le arunc in zare.
Ii mai pasa cuiva oare?
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I am tired of all this pain...
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My Will-Dream · Trimis: 14/09/2006 11:44 Titlul subiectului:

ce superba e !!!!!!!! sweeeeeeeet!!!!!!!!! ft ft ft mistho .. ai talent mare !
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I step trought the dark to the paradise sadness , with blind eyes a look for the answers
you take my little heaven and destroy my delicate heart , the tears who flow into the raven … transfome into an ocean .
I wont to be your protector angel , to fall to the sky on the earth , in front of your eyes , knock knock to your door ....
Poetry Land Poetry Land